Need some comments!

[DaLancinator Profile Website]

Hello everybody!

I'm working on a Hardcore mainstream/Gabber track, and i need some comments to finish it.

Download it here

I need to know what i can add or delete, which are the good and the bad things in it, so please leave your comments and tell me what you think about it!

some infos : made on fruity loops 5. some samples taken from this website. vocals from dmx - x gon give it to ya. melody made by myself.

Thanks ppl!!

[JohnMerrik]

I dig it, but I think the break sounds kinda cheap... try using a more percussive break, and less of the glitch effect.