I Hate Breakcore

by **the shallow stairs** » Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:34 pm

okay, so this is the first 10 measures or so of the song that we are making (Napcat & The Shallow Stairs) pleas repsond, with suggestions, and be honest...

ps: i said honest not harsh, so please no "this sucks you cunt bag", but "i did not enjoy this; work on x, y, and z will be good"

by **the shallow stairs** » Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:34 pm

oh yea, here is the link :oops:

http://www.archive.org/details/IntroToOneOfMySongs

by **the shallow stairs** » Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:18 pm

here is the newest version

http://www.archive.org/details/nctssintro2

by **HORSE FORCE** » Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:43 pm

damn son. sounds good. the pauses are weird tho. if you want the effect of a pause, sustain a note or something. i would also try to give the listener something to hold onto for a bit, but then take it away. this keeps the music interesting.

by **the shallow stairs** » Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:45 pm

yea i've been working on that, what i did is i put a sick muted bass sound in some of the pauses, sort of making it suspenseful, then go all out with the hardcore shit

ty for responding!

by **the shallow stairs** » Wed Dec 19, 2007 1:53 am

well, looks like this topic is not overflowing with responses, however, i tried to upload a track but, it will not work, and for the life of me i can't figure out why, so if you want to hear anything i have send me a private message or e-mail (iheartbreakcore@mail.com)

by **PEPCORE** » Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:21 am

Nice and random, love it a lot, only i agree with what Horse Force said, pauze are weird, but you can change that, so i like it so far

by **galvan** » Sat Dec 22, 2007 6:30 pm

it's nice, but indeed pauses are a bit strange

by **JDance** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:08 am

Listening now mate! Interesting, weird and it's got a nice combination of sounds! I actually quite liked the pauses, a kind of noisy broken drum 'n' bass thing going on to start with, silence, then back to banging noise again! Good effort!

BUT. . . Also agree with Horse Force! Think a lot of the listeners would like to hear some sustained note (or droning noise) in between the banging shit!

by **the shallow stairs** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:10 am

aight..aight..thanks for the input :shock:

by **JDance** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:11 am

the shallow stairs wrote:i tried to upload a track but, it will not work, and for the life of me i can't figure out why,

Same here mate. Frustrating shit! That's why I'm posting my shit here!

by **the shallow stairs** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:37 am

yea i also put it on my myspace (see below)

I Hate Breakcore

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