New to the whole breakcore thing, opinions wanted

[StarvingBum Profile]

I have been a fan of the music for some time and always wanted to make it but never could really get anything down i like the sound of. Then I found out FL Studio is a POS so I looked for something new. I found a wonderful little tool called renoise, then after getting to know it for a little while I produced something that could sound like breakcore lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fYnyB_t9ag

It is not a full track, just a 20 second clip of me testing things out. I just want honest opinions on how that sounds, I have put a little work on it since I recorded that so if you guys are interested in hearing more of it let me know. Soon I will start to incorporate samples into the works lol.

[Feutus Lapdance Profile Website]

Not a bad first start...intrested how it looks like when finist

I think THIS IS YOUR BRAIN ON A CRACK OVERDOSE (SUPER SPEED DUBCORE MIXXXXX) has more potentiol of becoming awsome an wild.
Just cop it up again.

[StarvingBum Profile]

Not a bad first start...intrested how it looks like when finist

I think THIS IS YOUR BRAIN ON A CRACK OVERDOSE (SUPER SPEED DUBCORE MIXXXXX) has more potentiol of becoming awsome an wild.
Just cop it up again.

Hey thanks, I have been a noise artist for a few years and that was my first renoise track I ever completed to full. I did work on the break a little bit, trying to take it a little at a time so I do not overdo myself and stress out and quit like I used to do lol. http://www.starvingbum.org/poop.mp3

[djtheblade Profile Website]

Fruity loops isn't a piece of shit if your name is Xanopticon or TechDiff.

[StarvingBum Profile]

Fruity loops isn't a piece of shit if your name is Xanopticon or TechDiff.

Eh idk I am just not a fan of the whole setup of it. Semi update on the track, tweaked the bass lines some and added a few more breaks in it, still working on it slowly lol (doin other things at once)

http://www.starvingbum.org/take3.mp3