open my eyes
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open my eyes
by l urk » Mon Mar 30, 2009 10:42 am
i have just started to produce my own work... i want feedback from people i don't know and if my shit is listenable... i want your feedback because you are not my friends (close friends i mean) that when i ask them what you think they go on saying that its great but with no critisicm... and i dont know what to believe...
i think i have good ideas but have to improve on buildup...
leave something that can help me do something that will make people want to hear my stuff
thankyou ...
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i think i have good ideas but have to improve on buildup...
leave something that can help me do something that will make people want to hear my stuff
thankyou ...
myspace in signature- Feutus Lapdance
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Re: open my eyes
by Feutus Lapdance » Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:51 pm
Funny IDM stuff. Joure songs could use more of a climax and structure. What I dident like was ilgappuniza, the flute is to dominant.
I also see jou like Wisp and Flashbulb. Therfore I recoment jou buy Dreaming In Reverse from Meander on low Resolution 21
Jou will love it.
I think it contains the structure joure songs could use
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I also see jou like Wisp and Flashbulb. Therfore I recoment jou buy Dreaming In Reverse from Meander on low Resolution 21
Jou will love it.
I think it contains the structure joure songs could use
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Re: open my eyes
by tapage » Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:49 pm
Feutus Lapdance wrote:Funny IDM stuff. Joure songs could use more of a climax and structure. What I dident like was ilgappuniza, the flute is to dominant.
I also see jou like Wisp and Flashbulb. Therfore I recoment jou buy Dreaming In Reverse from Meander on low Resolution 21
Jou will love it.
I think it contains the structure joure songs could use
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great advise
beautifull release...
Fallen Clouds
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by Feutus Lapdance » Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:01 pm
Another tip for jou
Shee Tapage Myspace.
There awaits a butyful IDM song. Mooie shit zeg. (To bad Denbosch dont have breakcore partys).
Shee Tapage Myspace.
There awaits a butyful IDM song. Mooie shit zeg. (To bad Denbosch dont have breakcore partys).
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by epilektric » Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:44 am
You asked for it so here it is. Please keep in mind that I am just one person and do not speak for the entire world.
didj
- sounds like FSOL or some other ambient left field group from the 90's.
- light rhythmic echo recalls Plastik Man's sheet one.
- lack of snares creates a more tribal sound.
This track is very mellow, relaxing and aimlessly plods forward. Elaborate on the structure with a better build up to start the track. A longer drop out at the 3:00 minute mark with some interesting injection of sounds here and there before building it up again might also help. Personally, I like the track but I also think it sounds like a lot of stuff I've heard before.
il-malja
- opening is promising, recalls some 90's stuff like Speedy J.
- goes on a little long without change
- melody finally drops out but doesn't sound very good
- melody drops again to just drums, very thin sounding and lacks interest.
- giant reverb sound takes over the track, not liking it.
- the beat really hasn't changed much in this song. It just keeps going on.
- messing with the melody at the end, nice.
- glitches totally out of place with the rest of the song. Also my favorite part.
Overall, I did not like this track. It didn't seem to go anywhere or develop into much. However, the last part of the track really helped redeem it for me. You should work that stuff at the end into a whole track.
kiss the puppet
- nice squeaky eerie stuff in the beginning.
- expected more build up sooner at the breakdown in the middle.
- elastic synth sound has too much focus.
I think more structure might help this track. The beat is chopped up nicely but could use more variation, specifically every 4 measures or so with a break. Without the breaks, the beat just keeps plodding on.
dilli
- opens with some nice crackle roll percussion.
- sitar? sounds nice.
- looming oppressive drum just at the right moment.
- the beat drops in. good.
- the drop out, nice, glitchy, interesting.
- sitar is not as dominant here and has dropped out now. good.
- a new sound comes in to take up the interest of the sitar. good.
I like this track. It has a lot of interesting stuff going on and some nice structural organization. I'd really like to hear the beat take over somewhere in the middle and really drive the song for a while. Nice song though and probably my favorite so far.
ilGappuniza
- mellow opening
- interesting chopped drums
- repetitive synth seems out of sync with song.
- most things sound out of sync in this song.
- needs more structure.
- the horn needs to go. it was ok for the first opening bit.
The horn seems like the main focus of the track. That's fine I guess but it's driving me nuts. Maybe if it actually went away for a while and other things happened and then you returned to it periodically. The entire track sounds disjointed and out of sync. I assume that's intentional but I didn't care for it much. The drums are promising in this song but the surrounding sounds need more work.
didj
- sounds like FSOL or some other ambient left field group from the 90's.
- light rhythmic echo recalls Plastik Man's sheet one.
- lack of snares creates a more tribal sound.
This track is very mellow, relaxing and aimlessly plods forward. Elaborate on the structure with a better build up to start the track. A longer drop out at the 3:00 minute mark with some interesting injection of sounds here and there before building it up again might also help. Personally, I like the track but I also think it sounds like a lot of stuff I've heard before.
il-malja
- opening is promising, recalls some 90's stuff like Speedy J.
- goes on a little long without change
- melody finally drops out but doesn't sound very good
- melody drops again to just drums, very thin sounding and lacks interest.
- giant reverb sound takes over the track, not liking it.
- the beat really hasn't changed much in this song. It just keeps going on.
- messing with the melody at the end, nice.
- glitches totally out of place with the rest of the song. Also my favorite part.
Overall, I did not like this track. It didn't seem to go anywhere or develop into much. However, the last part of the track really helped redeem it for me. You should work that stuff at the end into a whole track.
kiss the puppet
- nice squeaky eerie stuff in the beginning.
- expected more build up sooner at the breakdown in the middle.
- elastic synth sound has too much focus.
I think more structure might help this track. The beat is chopped up nicely but could use more variation, specifically every 4 measures or so with a break. Without the breaks, the beat just keeps plodding on.
dilli
- opens with some nice crackle roll percussion.
- sitar? sounds nice.
- looming oppressive drum just at the right moment.
- the beat drops in. good.
- the drop out, nice, glitchy, interesting.
- sitar is not as dominant here and has dropped out now. good.
- a new sound comes in to take up the interest of the sitar. good.
I like this track. It has a lot of interesting stuff going on and some nice structural organization. I'd really like to hear the beat take over somewhere in the middle and really drive the song for a while. Nice song though and probably my favorite so far.
ilGappuniza
- mellow opening
- interesting chopped drums
- repetitive synth seems out of sync with song.
- most things sound out of sync in this song.
- needs more structure.
- the horn needs to go. it was ok for the first opening bit.
The horn seems like the main focus of the track. That's fine I guess but it's driving me nuts. Maybe if it actually went away for a while and other things happened and then you returned to it periodically. The entire track sounds disjointed and out of sync. I assume that's intentional but I didn't care for it much. The drums are promising in this song but the surrounding sounds need more work.
by l urk » Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:47 am
10x epilektrik for that informational feedback 10x alot... will try to rearrange every single note you pointed out
will try to rearrange every single note you pointed out- djtheblade
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by djtheblade » Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:43 pm
I like that Meander release, I think Meander is another alias of Tapage, the Hardcore/Breaks producer that did some stuff with Ophidian (Particularly The Mine, which is as deadly as they come), although that's going off topic a little.
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